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Post by Forsaken on Mar 1, 2009 14:41:40 GMT -7
Write at least 2 paragraphs on how Rion would act in a certain situation. Be sure to give lots of details on his thoughts and actions. Please do this in third person. If you capture the character well enough, you'll get the part.
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Post by cain on Mar 4, 2009 9:06:13 GMT -7
Rion looked himself from the mirror and touched his face like he would never have seen it before. He thinked that was he any less of an human than the others were..He pushed away his toughts of questions "why me?" that wasent a question that anybody would answer and a question that didint make any sense. Rion didint want to be sad,afterall his live wasent so bad. He had Lilia and whit a tought of being real Rion that didint matter was he really Rion afterall,but that tought always made Rion smile,and so he did when he tought of it again. "I know Im real" he said and put his hand on his chest.
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Post by Forsaken on Mar 4, 2009 9:33:02 GMT -7
I like where you're going... just needs to be a little longer
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Post by cain on Mar 7, 2009 9:02:29 GMT -7
Rion walked on the grey hallway exhausted from a big fight whit other galerians.his face was pale and bloody like his clothes aswell. He crawled himself to his room and walked towards his small dirty bed and lied down like a dead corpse. He was Tired because of he had shortcircuit on the battle and he took too many drugs too,because the battle was hard for him. His eyes wanted to sleep but Rion forced them to stay open. He looked from the window to the sky, It looked just like it would explode at any second because it rained so hard. Rion sighed and turned his head to his rooms ceiling. "I wonder where Lilia is.." Rion said sadly but he still had constante voice "It would have been nice to talk to her..and know that she is save.." Rions eyes started to close down more and more,but he didint want to sleep yet,before he would know where lilia would be. Rion still closed his eyes for a second. He saw an white space inside his head,suddenly it turned into that room where he was born because of dorothy,Rion walked towards that strange birth chamber where he was sleepinh.looked himself from the distance and readed the text "steiners family..Rion" he welted awful when he watched himself sleeping. He heard a voice behind him,Rion whispered quietly "Cain.." He turned around but before he saw his brother,Mushroom towers room dissapeared and Rion opened up his eyes because of a terrible headeche "oh.. my head hurts.."He said and rised to sit, he put his hands on his forehead when his body started to tremble."my body cant hold any longer" Rion thinked, Sweat started to flow along Rions forehead. "ah.." the pain was awful,Rion wiped his forehead from the sweat whit his shirt "Im too weak..Why Im a galerian?" Rion was dissapointed and scared."What if someone have done something bad to Lilia..and I cant do nothing?" Rion blinked his eyes couple times and vorced himself to stop thinking such nonsenses,suddenly for Rions luck he heard Lilias sweet voice from somewhere near but Rion was too weak and sleepy to hear what she exatcly said, Rion put down his hands,smiled and turned his head from the direction where he heard lilia speaking "S-she is save.." Rion touhgt relieved and let himself to pass out.
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Post by Rion on Mar 8, 2009 19:19:47 GMT -7
Rion’s boots tapped against the worn creaky floorboards beneath him as he crossed the room. He exited silently out of the apartment, not bothering to lock the door behind him, with the key the clerk had given him. Did it matter? Rion wasn’t staying, he had others things to deal with, like finding Lilia.
‘And not getting yourself killed by children spawned by a crazed computer,’ his mind sarcastically noted. How he could have a sense of humor after all the things he’d been through today was beyond him. At least he was keeping himself together… or maybe he really had gone insane.
Mentally shaking the thought off, he turned his attention back to the present, and glanced on ahead. Due to the heavy downpour of rain pounding over the old roof of the Babylon Hotel, it had caused a few leaks to make the decay known. Several were on the third floor corridor, although apparently someone had put buckets out to catch the droplets. So someone did care about this dump of a rundown hotel after all.
What was Lilia even doing here?
The clerk had told Rion no one by that name was here, but it didn’t exactly mean she wasn’t here. She could have signed in with a different name since Dorothy was looking for her. It would have been reckless to use her real name otherwise. The girl was smart. Now all he needed to do was find her, yet with so many rooms and no patience, this was going to take some time.
Pausing in his tracks, Rion sighed drearily, combing a hand through his hair. Maybe he could ask the clerk if there were any other woman staying at the hotel; that would narrow his search. Then again, he might get mistaken for wanting some ‘company’ so maybe that was a no go.
Shoulders sagging, his head hang low in an almost depressed manner “Why me…?” he idly mused under his breath.
Alright, scrap that last thought. He would have to take the slower root, either way he wasn’t leaving this hotel until he found Lilia. He just hoped the girl was alright, the way she'd cut off before when they were talking telepathically had him worried.
‘They’re here’ was the last thing Lilia had said. But so far, Rion had not seen anyone of Dorothy’s children or experiments. Had he got the wrong hotel, or had they left? What if he’d come too late?
No, no! Lilia was still alive, Rion was sure. If they’d found her, she would have called out to him. Since she hadn’t, she was still hidden somewhere, but unable to respond to him without giving away her position, he would have to find her without her guidance.
Reaching into his side pack, his hand grasp around the ragged clown doll inside. Carefully bringing out, Rion held it in front of him, studying it so intensely. He’d kept after finding it in the shed at his home, he’d already gotten in contact with Lilia through it, and didn’t need it anymore, but he’d felt reluctant to leave it, he didn’t know why, not fully. Maybe because it had belonged to Lilia at one time, that he felt a sense of duty that he had to find her more than ever, to put an end to this nightmare. Having the doll with him felt childish, but at the same time gave him come comfort. He wouldn’t throw it away; it was going back to its owner.
Tucking it back safely into his sidepack, Rion gazed onward in determination, and headed to the elevator. As those metal gates closed, he whispered three single words under his breath.
“Wait for me…”
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Post by Forsaken on Mar 16, 2009 19:42:54 GMT -7
rionsteiner
(ACCEPTED)
Your name will be altered to 'Rion', if that is alright with you?
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Post by Rion on Mar 21, 2009 5:33:16 GMT -7
DEAL =D *tackle glomps you over*
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